Thursday, October 15, 2009

Value Essay

Music of the Field

With Apple coming out with a new product constantly, and people always feeling like they need to have the next thing, always being bigger and better, people often forget the simple things that bring us joy. We are always so focused on the material things in life that we forget about those priceless moments that nothing can beat. What in our lives is really valuable? Is it the new computer or fashion look? Is it the time we spend with family and friends? Or is it really just the moments we feel most alive that are truly valuable?

As I walk out of the school, I reach into the pocket of my North Face jacket and fish out my sleek and stylish iPod touch. I’ve been waiting the whole day for the chance to listen to my own music. I unravel the headphones and wipe the dust off the screen. I press the small circular button at the bottom of the rectangle. The screen lights up and reads “Slide to Unlock,” with a bar beneath it. I slide the bar and my music world is opened. I touch the orange music icon and scroll through my playlists. I decide on my “Top Picks.” I then scroll trough the songs until I see one that hits me. With its 16GB of memory, I can fit most any song I want into one portable piece of technology. I love its convenience and capabilities.

We break from our huddle and set out to our positions. I jog to my place as center defense. The tension in my body rises as the referee walks to the center of the field. “Goalie ready?” he asks the opposing goalkeeper. She nods. “Goalie ready?” he asks ours. She nods also. The referee blows his whistle and the game begins.
The center forward hits the ball and then we're in motion. All nervous feeling is gone and I know what I'm doing. When the ball comes my way I have my stick down and I attack. When I get the ball away from the opposing player I pass it up to my offense. I feel accomplished and know I've done a good job. When the ball comes down the field again, I am ready and repeat the process. I feel at home on the field. I feel in control.

My iPod and playing field hockey are two extremely important things to me. They appear to be totally different, but to me they are similar. They both give me comfort and a sense of control. With my iPod, I can always choose the song that I feel suits my mood and on the field I am in control of my plays. My iPod allows me to listen to the music that comforts and relaxes me almost anywhere, and field hockey is a type of release that is similar to why I listen to music. So although these two things are very different, in my mind, they are similar in terms of what they provide for me.

It's hard for me to say what I truly value more. Overall, I'd say priceless moment are more valuable than material items. But for me, my iPod isn't truly what I value, it's what my iPod provides for me. Music is everything to me. It can lift my spirits when im upset or angry. It can calm me down when I'm worked up about something. It is my main form of release and relaxation. What I really value is listening to music, my iPod simply gives me an efficient and convenient way to do that. So I value that also.

Field hockey and my iPod are two very valuable things to me. I value them for different, yet similar reasons. I don't know what I would do if either of them weren't in my life anymore. I would say that it is impossible for me to decide which is more valuable to me because they are both so essential to my life, happiness, and well-being.

1 comment:

  1. I think the things that Ashley values most aren't necessarily the most expensive items. Even though she values her ipod, she doesn't value it because of the money, she values it because of what it provides for her. I think what she is saying is that she values the things that allow her to relax and have fun.

    In my opinion, both of Ashley's things were well described. However, if I had to pick just one, I would say that the way she described her ipod was particularly well written. I like the sentence, "I’ve been waiting the whole day for the chance to listen to my own music," because it is something I can very much related to. I get that exact same feeling every day.

    One of the essay's overall strengths was definitely Ashley's word choice. She used great descriptions and great words that made the essay flow nicely, as well as being fun and interesting to read.

    It is very hard for me to give any suggestions for this essay, because I think it was great. The only thing I would say is to proof read. I found one or two typos and missing words that could have been easily avoided. But, I thought this essay was very good and relateable, and I enjoyed reading it. Great job Ashley!

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